31-07-20
Internal Communications:
To: Jenny McCabe, Manager
From: Harry McGregor
Date: 31 July 2020
Re: Review update about kitchen recycling.
I have received your request for an update about the kitchen recycling. Please find the following review.
Most of the recycling bins are being used correctly (eg plastic in the bins, etc)
I have received mostly positive feedback from the stuff about the new system.
Some stuff thinks it’s a waste of time, however, they follow the rules.
The food bin isn’t emptied often enough and becomes smelly.
There is some confusion over the recyclable types.
The new recycling program is going well, however, we may have a few problems with the recyclable types, therefore I recommend that we need to give instructions to our staff members regarding the new recycling program so that they won’t have any confusion over the recyclable types.
Harry McGregor
Team Leader
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